Argument Essays

I chose the essay, Whodunit - The Media, and I feel that is was a well written essay, except there were a few areas that the writer could have done a better job on. It wasn't clear which side of the argugument the writer was on until the second paragraph. As well as a bad thesis statement, here leading sentences were not great either. Besides that, I thought there was good transitions between paragraphs, good information, and very well worded. I personally thought it was a very interesting essay, and the author is fairly knowledgeable on the subject.